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Perhaps the biggest news in the spider-verse these days is John Byrne's revamp
of the character in the pages of Spider-Man: Chapter One. Byrne has made
some controversial changes. In his version, Peter Parker and Otto Octavius are
caught in the same accident, which simultaneously creates Spider-Man and Dr.
Octopus. The Burglar specifically targets Uncle Ben in order to steal his
recently purchased PC and, spying Spidey leaving the house, thinks the webhead
is casing the joint for himself. And, Spidey appears to let the Burglar escape
not because he thinks stopping a crook is beneath a bigshot like him but because
he seems to be temporarily thinking unclearly.
The new origin has taken potshots and not just from fans. In The Comics Buyer's
Guide #1303 (November 6, 1998), writer Peter David lambasts Chapter One
#1 for everything from its cover to its overkill of information. To Byrne's
desire to connect the "apparently random coincidence" of the same Burglar
running by Spidey and later killing Uncle Ben, David says, "It was that awful
randomness, the incredible unpredictibility that underscored the terrible lesson
that Spider-Man learned." and determines that "A once-elegantly simple morality
tale has become needlessly involved and convoluted, basically because Byrne
overthought it."
In CBG #1315 (January 29, 1999), Fred Hembeck lampoons the devastating explosion
that now creates Spider-Man and Dr. Octopus while apparently killing dozens of
people. "Where's the survivor's guilt?", Hembeck has Spidey say. "Why, after
weeks in the hospital, are my first thoughts upon release about joining the
football team just to impress girls?"
With all the fuss that Byrne's Spidey has kicked up, I started wondering about
the way Spidey's origin has been presented in the past. First of all, if
you're not intimately acquainted with it, go and read our detailed review
of Amazing Fantasy #15.
All done? Great, now let's sneak a peek at some of the other renditions of the
oft-told origin, starting with Peter's own recollections as made in ASM #50.
In Amazing 50, Spidey briefly remembers his origin. While it is very brief and
provides little information, what it does provide...
Uncle Ben and Aunt May bought Peter his first microscope. This seems to be the
same scene from Amazing Fantasy 15, yet this happens before he became Spidey.
Spidey can be seen counting cash when the burglar runs off. This (1) isn't what
he was doing in the original, and (2) makes you wonder if Maxie's "have to give
you a check" spiel was a load of baloney.
Finally, Pete strongly hints that he became Spider-Man to revenge Ben's death,
stopping crooks, and that he just happened to find an armed robber early in his
career (who happened to be the Burglar).
This story is a ten page back-up which follows the "Lo, This Monster" tale. It
is in black and white with an interesting artist combination... Stan's brother
embellished by the creator of the Sub-Mariner.
This version begins at Uncle Ben's graveside ceremony. It is raining and the
only attendees are Peter, Aunt May, and the minister. Throughout and after the
service, Peter cannot forget that he was the cause of his Uncle's death and
these thoughts bring on the flashback to the origin of Spidey.
Forget all that stuff about the kids at school or the wheatcakes or wrestling
with Uncle Ben. This story starts right at the radioactivity experiment. The
spider descends, bites Peter, dies... all in four panels. Peter staggers outside
and is so pre-occupied that he doesn't see two toughs looking over the latest
Racing Form. He bumps into one and that bully gives Pete a sock in the jaw.
"Watch where yer walkin', ya four-eyed foul-up!" Peter realizes that he hardly
felt the blow. He takes a swing of his own and misses his opponent. Good thing,
too. He hits a lamppost instead and snaps it in two.
Things pretty much conform to the original after that, from the leap away from
the speeding car to the creation of his web-shooters and costume. But in this
version, Peter never goes to the wrestling match and never meets the TV
producer. Instead, he decides to head to the TV studio himself and it is while
he is swinging in through a window that the burglar runs by pursued by the
police officer. He gives the cop the predictable brush-off and then goes
to audition, eventually becoming a big TV star.
And so he comes home one day to get the awful news of Ben's death (and the cop
this time is clearly not the same man from the TV studio), goes to the
warehouse (this time, violently ripping the boards off a blocked-off window) and
stops the man who is the fugitive that he allowed to escape... discovering yet
again that "with great power there must also always be great responsibility!"
Much of this issue is devoted to Spidey's battle with the Beetle but there is
enough of a flashback to proclaim on the cover that the story features "a
super-special bonus... Spidey's origin re-told!" The issue begins with a
bummed-out Peter trying to cope with the fact that Gwen Stacy has left him, and
gone to London... presumably because, in the wake of her father's death, she
wants to get far away from Spider-Man. This anguish calls the origin back to
Peter's mind. In this version, again, we begin right at the radioactivity
demonstration. This time, after the bite, the story leaps right to the fight
with the two toughs. Now, however, they are "local creeps" who pick a fight and
they know Peter by name. ("Here's somethin' for ya, Puny Parker", says the one
that socks Pete in the jaw.) The lamppost snaps, the car arrives, and Pete leaps
to safety. But, this time there are three witnesses to the leap, not counting
whoever may be in the car.
Peter goes home and makes his webbing and costume but, now, the angry need to
show others has been wiped away, making the young man much more even-tempered.
When he creates his gear, he "can't remember what made me do it". When he fails
to stop the burglar, he simply says, "Sorry, pal. You're paid for it, I'm not.
Besides, I've something more important to do." which turns the "I'm through
being pushed around" cockiness into something more like apathy. (Also, in this
version, the burglar comes through as Spidey swings into the studio but, this
time, he was already "signed for a TV variety show". Again, there's no wrestling
match and no TV producer.)
The cop who tells Pete the bad news is still a different one from the TV studio,
only this time the warehouse is not given a specific name. (How does Pete find
it?) He bursts through the boarded-up window and the burglar actually
takes a shot at him. Spidey pulls the gun away with a spray of webbing. He
punches the burglar as he swings down on a web and wishes the bad guy "had
super-human powers... so I could punish him more". He discovers who the killer
is, as usual, then this version takes us, for one panel, to the graveside,
showing us the rain and the umbrellas again, just as Spectacular Spider-Man
#1 did.
This is hardly mainstream continuity, but let's take a look at the Spidey
Super Stories version, written by Jean Thomas (with a little help from Bill
Effros).
Peter is a big fan of plants (not chemistry), and so he didn't have many friends.
His Aunt May loved him (no mention of Uncle Ben). Peter went to a science fair.
The sign said "RADIOACTIVITY DANGER!" He got bitten by a radioactive spider.
A car came along (purple, not blue). Peter jumped high. He climbed the wall.
He snapped a metal pipe (not crushed).
Peter finds a car parked by a fire hydrant. He lifts it up and moves it.
A big metal safe falls on Peter. He jumps out of the way, using something
that warns him of danger. He calls it his Spider-Sense. He goes home, and
decides to use his power to help others. He makes a costume and some web-shooters.
"The kids laughed and called me a leaf lover! But look out, world! Here comes
Spider-Man!"
(Not the end, friend - The Beginning!)
So, there's a couple of subtle differences there if you look close enough.
Now, an origin version not written by Stan Lee. This issue, a fill-in which
comes between Len Wein's and Marv Wolfman's runs on Amazing, is Bill Mantlo's
only writing credit on the flagship title. It is a seventeen page recap of the
entire series, beginning with Spidey's origin and going through a rundown of
major villains, friends, romances, and tragedies. (Check out page 17, page 11 of
the story, for the Stacy-haters special. George and Gwen Stacy killed off on the
same page!) Again, our only interest here is the origin section.
The story begins with Spidey sitting up in a tree by the gate to a cemetary. A
huge full moon fills the sky. He is there for one special reason. It is the
anniversary of the day Uncle Ben died. He swings down to Ben's grave, gets down
on one knee, and bows his head as the anguishing memories wash over him.
This time, the "wheatcakes" and "can hardly out-wrestle him" incidents are tied
together with the gift of the microscope as Ben tussles Pete's hair with one
hand while he hides the gift behind his back with the other. "Besides, he won't
feel much like eating, once he sees the present we've bought him!", Ben says.
After presenting the gift, Ben tells Pete that "You're a son to your Aunt and
I!", while May says, "And your grades in school have made us very proud of you!"
But the kids in school don't think much of him. Yes, Flash and the gang are back
in this version and it even looks like Sal may have snuck Harry Osborn into the
group, though it's hard to tell. As usual, no one wants to go with Pete to the
science hall. So, he goes by himself.
The experiment, the spider, and the bite are much the same as the original,
though the scientists conducting the experiment no longer have any resemblance
to Mr. Warren. (Still, they certainly know Peter. A grey-haired man with a grey
mustache utters the familiar line, "Looks as though our experiment unnerved
young Parker!")
In a dizzying montage that covers two pages, most of the rest of the story is
told. The street punks and the punch that hits the lamppost are gone. Instead,
we are back to the car that almost hits Pete and the climb up the wall and the
crushed steel pipe. The incident with Crusher Hogan and the TV appearances just
whip right by (though Bill is finally the first writer to say that Peter put "a
stocking over his head" when he wrestled the Crusher). As in the original, the
Burglar runs by, and Spidey tells the cop "I look out for number one!"
(Eventually, the policeman is portrayed as a security guard, but not yet. Here,
as in Amazing Fantasy, he is still threatening Pete with, "I oughtta run you
in!")
In the following panel, designated as "a few days later", Peter comes home to
find the patrol car in front of his house. He is told about the murder and the
Acme Warehouse. He rushes up to his room to change into his Spidey suit (on the
wall is a pennant that says "Marvel") We do not see Spidey enter the warehouse.
Instead, we see him confront the Burglar. (This time, he is up in a corner of
the room, with his feet adhered to the wall and his right hand adhered to the
ceiling.) The Burglar immediately runs but Spidey leaps down and takes him out
with one punch. And, sure enough, look who the Burglar is.
At the gravesite, the webhead's spider-sense starts to tingle. It is a warning
that Aunt May is coming to pay her respects to her husband. (Why do these two do
this in the middle of the night?) Spidey leaps up into the tree and watches her
while his memories continue to overwhelm him (and us). Finally, May puts flowers
on Ben's grave and leaves.
Only then, does Spidey leap back down and put his own tribute on the grave. "I'm
returning your gift to you, Uncle Ben!", he says, "It's the only way I can
express my gratitude!...You didn't die in vain, Uncle Ben! You died that
Spider-Man might be born! It's not the way I would have chosen it to happen, but
if your death is to have meaning, then I must rededicate myself to your faith
that one day Peter Parker will do something to change this world for the
better!"
Spidey swings away and minutes later the night watchman makes his rounds. He is
troubled that it is his son's birthday ("He's a smart one but the other kids
pick on him 'cause he ain't a fighter!") and he has no gift for him. But, then
he notices something sitting in front of a tombstone. It is Pete's old
microscope and the watchman takes it willingly. "Sometimes you can profit by
other folks memories", he says... a nice finish that was completely ignored in
ASM #290 (July 1987) in which Aunt May accidentally gives the microscope away to
the church bazaar and Pete goes through all sorts of shenanigans to get it
back.
This issue begins by reprinting the origin story as given in the first nine
pages of ASM #94. The last panel two panels of the origin in #94 then lead
into the main story, but in this ALL Detergent reprints, we get a single panel
where Peter says how much he misses Gwen.
This comic then reprints the "Secrets of Spider-Man" featurette from ASM
Annual #1. Then we get a reprint of the Beetle/Human Torch story from ASM
#21. Heck, there's nothing new in here at all!
This story has the Burglar returning to Peter's life, and Spider-Man's final
confrontation with the criminal who ruined his world. The origin is retold in
a colorful one-page flashback on page 6 (excluding ads). The story is covered
faithfully (not surprisingly, since Stan Lee was involved in writing ASM #200).
Basically we see a lonely student, an experiment, a spider-bite, a leap to
evade a car, Spider-Man ignoring a burgler, the tragic revealing of Uncle Ben's
death, the chase, the fight, and the discovery that the killer was the one and
the same whom Spider-Man let go. Not bad for a single page, huh?
The main story in this issue is Beetle vs. Spider-Man and the Gibbon. But it
seems like they had some space to fill, and Roger Stern must have figured that it
was about time that he had a go at re-working the origin of Spider-Man. To
assist, Greg LaRocque and Bob Wiacek do the art honors in this seventeen page
full re-worked version.
Now, most of the basic plot elements are retained, but there's just something
funny in the flavour of the scripting. Instead of a couple of panels of Peter
being rejected by his classmates, we get the full 11-panel version - basically
the same concepts, but instead of Stan and Steve's pacy and succinct 60's
story-telling style, we get just more of everything.
Example: When the spider falls on Peter's hand, Stan gives us one panel, saying:
"A spider! It bit me! But, why is burning so? Why is it glowing that way??"
By contrast: Roger gives us two panels: "That spider bit me! But why is it
glowing that way? And why is the byte burning so?! Better brush it off before
it bites again! After all, there's no telling where it's been!" And we get a
shot of Peter squashing the spider (which kind of ruins Tangled Web #1, but
that's another matter).
Moving on, we get Peter walking home through a bad neigbourhood and getting
hassled by two gratuitous tough guys. That's not Roger's addition, it was added
to the story some time ago. We get Peter figuring out that his shoes interfere
with his wall-crawling, and a few other more new self-discovery bits.
The rest of the story is pretty much standard, except with Peter being just
a little more vindictive and unkind. Basically, it's the Origin of Spider-Man,
with any subtle bits replaced by the obvious and less gentle 80's equivalent.
As you can probably tell, I really don't think it's an improvement by any
description.
It's a bit surprising that Roger Stern made such a mess of the origin story
in Spectacular #60. He otherwise has a pretty good track record. Perhaps his
most famous (and deservedly so) is this short backup story from ASM #248.
Spider-Man visits a very sick child, and reveals his origin and eventually his
secret identity.
The story is told in fragments. First we get three panels showing the bite, the
near miss by the car, and the leap to the roof-top and crushing the drainpipe.
Later we get two panels showing Spidey letting the Burglar escape, and subsequently
the Burglar killing Ben as Aunt May watches on. Note that the relative locations
of Ben and May at the time of Ben's death is a detail which varies greatly from
telling to telling.
This is a very brief and truncated version, but in five panels it manages to
tell many of the key elements of the story. Other than showing May present at
Ben's killing where AF #15 is vague about May's whereabouts, this is a true
telling in what it does show.
As part of revealing his identity to the Black Cat, Peter relates to her an
abbreviated version of his origin story. We get six panels, with a narrative.
We see Peter, beloved by May and Ben. Peter, bookworm with no friends. Peter
bitten by radioactive spider. Peter leaping away from blue sedan. Then Peter
letting Burglar escape, and a sixth panel with Spider-Man telling Black Cat
how he did catch the Burglar, but not before he killed Uncle Ben.
Actually, that last bit is worth noting... if you didn't know the story, you
might think that Spidey actually had a change of heart and decided to go track
down the Burglar, but then the Burglar killed Uncle Ben. It's not completely
clear that chasing the Burglar began only when Ben was killed. Subtle difference,
but quite an important one.
This 62 page Graphic Novel explores the pasts of both Peter Parker and Mary Jane
Watson-Parker, but let's stick with the Spidey origin (in which Mary Jane makes
one fateful appearance) rather than breakdown the whole book.
The story begins with Richard and Mary Parker dropping their infant son Peter
off at Ben and May's house. Peter confesses that, because his parents never came
back, "I was sure their leaving had something to do with me" but that's pretty
much all the prelude we get before the fateful spider bite. In this version, the
radioactivity experiment takes place at the "Midtown High science hall" and
Peter gives his age. He is fifteen.
Peter staggers out of school, passing by Flash Thompson and Liz Allan on the
street. Flash takes the opportunity to heckle him. The car then arrives, causing
Peter's leap. The witnesses are gone and the little boy (who I didn't mention in
the AF #15 rundown) is back.
Other things are back, too. The crushed steel pipe on the roof, the $100
wrestling match with Crusher Hogan, the white turtleneck, the fishnet mask.
After Pete defeats Crusher, he is approached by "Maxie... a booking agent for
concerts, TV shows, personal appearances". Pete takes Maxie's business card.
Back home, May and Ben bring in cookies and milk (instead of the original
"crackers") and Pete proceeds to create his costume. (His webbing and shooters
are an "old science project [that] might just do the trick". And this science
project was exactly... what?)
This time, we don't see Spider-Man's stage act but the rest is very close to the
original. He is besieged by the press for photo spreads and interviews (Life
Magazine has morphed into People Magazine) and he steps out into the hallway in
time to see the burglar run past. (This time he has a garment bag over his arm
rather than blue pants.) Now the cop is a security guard but Peter is in
original form. "From now on I just look out for number one", he says again,
"That means me."
At home, Peter receives his microscope. This time, a nice scene is added by
Gerry. Pete and Uncle Ben are out on the front porch at night and Ben asks his
nephew if he has a girl-friend. He has noticed that Pete is "more cheerful"
these days. He whistles at breakfast, hums in the shower. Peter doesn't tell him
the reason why.
Spidey's TV career continues. Again, the newspaper headlines are shown, but this
time the Daily Bugle is included with "Spider-Man... or menace?". Other new
details are related. "People Magazine was planning a cover story for their
special Thanksgiving issue... CBS wanted me for a prime-time Christmas special
with Harvey Korman and Tim Conway... and Maxie was projecting a six-figure
income by the end of the year". But Peter goes home to find that police car and
the bad news. He dashes into the house to change to Spidey. Meanwhile, Aunt May
is being looked at by a doctor over at Anna Watson's home. Mary Jane is there as
well. And MJ looks out the window in time to see Spider-Man leave from the
Parker home. And, in Gerry's biggest change to the whole origin, she realizes
that Peter Parker is Spider-Man.
Spidey heads off to the Acme Warehouse and the rest of the story goes pretty
much according to form.
The 30th anniversary of Spidey brought us double-sized issues with holo-covers
and new versions of the origin of our hero. This issue featured a five page
back-up told from Aunt May's point of view.
May awakes from a nightmare. Ben's death is replayed in her sleep. She gets up
and makes herself a cup of tea, which she drops on the floor, shattering the
china. But she doesn't notice. She is too busy seeing the moment that she held
Ben in her arms as his life ebbed away. When she learns that the killer is holed
up in a "warehouse over on Sutter Street", she runs over there (So, gone now, is
the notion that the warehouse is across town or that the Watsons are keeping an
eye on May) and sees the burglar lowered on a web. She also sees "white eyes
floating in the shadows, boring arrogantly, shamelessly, deep into her soul" and
these eyes of Spider-Man seem to say to her, "I'll be back... for everyone else
you love and hold dear". Thus, DeMatteis tries to explain Aunt May's loathing of
Spider-Man. He then ties this story together with the Vulture tale he presented
in the previous issue (Spectacular Spider-Man #188) in which Spidey
appears to rescue Peter and May gives the wall-crawler a peck on the cheek in
gratitude. Now she finally realizes that Spidey wasn't the monster who killed
Ben but "it was 'the monster' who captured Ben's killer". She is finally able to
sleep in peace. (Too bad this "Aunt May" was most likely the phony Norman Osborn
creation, invalidating all of this growth in characterization.)
The second of the 30th anniversary books features, in my opinion, Howard
Mackie's best Spider-Man story. It begins with a six page prelude looking at
Spidey's origin from agent Maxie Schiffman's point of view. This is the first
time (as far as I can tell) that Maxie gets a last name. In this version, Maxie
tells Spidey that he is "booked on the Carson show for tonight and that new
kid... Letterman... has expressed some interest". In their limo, Spidey tells
Maxie that a crook ran by him in the studio "and get this, the security
guard wanted me to stop him!"
Later, for who-knows-what reason, Maxie finds himself at the old Acme Warehouse,
in his limo, the night of Spider-Man's capture of the burglar. (Getting to be
quite a crowd outside of that warehouse that fateful night.) Only Maxie sees
Spidey leave the warehouse (though the web wrapped around the burglar sort of
gives it all away). Maxie tries to use his contacts at the Daily Bugle to play
the hero angle up but, instead, he gets a headline that reads Spider-Man:
Menace! and he knows it's the end of the line. "All our bookings cancelled
because of Jameson's editorial", he tells Spidey. The webhead swings off into a
new career as a hero and Maxie parlays his success with Spidey into a job as a
producer on the west coast.
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Amazing Spider-Man (Vol. 1) #365 (Story 1)
Story: "Fathers and Sins"
Summary: 30th Anniversary (Hologram Cover), Peter's Parents
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Danny Fingeroth
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David Michelinie,
Stan Lee,
Tom DeFalco,
Peter Sanderson
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Mark Bagley,
Aaron Lopresti,
John Romita, Sr.,
Tod Smith
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| Inkers: |
Randy Emberlin,
Aaron Lopresti,
John Romita, Sr.,
Andrew Pepoy
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Tom DeFalco
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Images Review Edit
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Aug 1992
: SMURF 365.500
: SM Title
: Amazing Spider-Man (Vol. 1)
Reprinted In: Marvel Visionaries, John Romita, Sr.
Reprinted In: The Very Best Of Spider-Man (TPB)
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This ten-page back-up gives us Spidey's origin as narrated by J. Jonah Jameson.
The story gives us JJJ's impressions of the web-slinger in counterpoint with the
true story. As Jameson speculates that Spidey must be "quite the ladies' man",
the story shows Peter's unpopularity at school. Jonah assumes Spidey "was
undoubtedly a troublemaker, a burden to his family" and the story shows Pete's
doting Uncle and Aunt. The radioactivity experiment is shown with Jonah guessing
that "It could be he's an alien, or one of those blasted mutants! Or for that
matter, maybe he was just bitten by some sort of super spider!... Nahh, too
bizarre!"
The tale continues in this vein, with Jonah misinterpreting events while the
origin is told more faithfully than any other versions since the original.
(Maxie Schiffman is even turned back into a "TV producer".) The only mistep is
Jonah's comment that Spider-Man "tracked down a common burglar, one who'd shot
some poor old guy in Queens". Surely, if Jonah was that interested in
investigating Spider-Man, he would know that the "old guy" was the uncle of his
best crime photographer!
The story concludes with Jonah believing that his negative editorials forced
Spidey to turn to crime-fighting, because "he was blacklisted from show business
overnight". And, so, Jameson believes that he is responsible for Spidey's
vigilantism, completely missing the implications of his defeat of the burglar.
But then, if he figured it all out, he wouldn't be J. Jonah Jameson, would
he?
The last of the 30th anniversary books features a two and a half page flashback
to the origin. This one begins with the love of Uncle Ben and Aunt May then
moves to the kids spurning Peter's invitation to the Science Hall. ("You stick
to science, we're party people!", "What a nerd!", they say this time.) In three
panels, he gets bitten, leaps away from the car, and crushes the steel pipe. In
three more panels, he gets the idea to fight Crusher Hogan, defeats him, and is
approached by the man who is, once again, "booking agent Max Schiffman". He
appears on television, lets the burglar escape ("I'm only interested in number
one!"), goes home to find Uncle Ben is murdered, and then (entirely skipping the
fight scene) learns that the defeated burglar is the one he could have stopped.
"Who knows the direction my life may have taken?", he tells Mary Jane. "I could
have been a rich television star! A respected celebrity!" "Or", Mary Jane
rejoins, "an egotistical jerk! I like you just the way you are..." bringing out
into the open a point that has been subtext all these years. The death of Uncle
Ben was a necessary sacrifice in order to create a hero. Or, as Earl Wells puts
it in Comics Journal #181, "with great power there must also come great
responsibility, and great sacrifice". (Note how, in all of Stan Lee's Spidey
work, deaths of main characters, not counting villains, always are the cause or
the effect of heroism. With Stan, Frederick Foswell and George Stacy sacrifice
themselves to the greater good. It is not until Stan leaves the writing to Gerry
Conway that a dying character, Gwen Stacy, becomes a victim rather than a hero.
Uncle Ben's death and Pete's reaction to it are the pinnacle of this theme.)
John Byrne spits in the face of Stan and Steve with his
Spider-Man: Chapter One #1 retelling, which screws up pretty much all the
details you care to name. The less said about this particular fiasco the better,
let's just do what everybody else has done, and just try and forget that
Chapter One ever happened, OK?
With all the variations, what we still come down to is this: An unfairly
unpopular teen is, while furthering his studies, bitten by a radioactive spider
and given amazing powers. (Only Byrne's version, with the explosion and hospital
stay, turns Peter's dedication to his studies into something that deserves
punishment rather than reward.) He uses those powers selfishly and, in so doing,
causes the death of his dearest male relative. He learns a bitter lesson that
power confers responsibility, that those chosen to lead must lead no matter how
much they want to resist, that the price of commanding the abilities to protect
is sacrifice and heartache and loss... and that it's worth it, perhaps not for
the individual but for the sake of society at large.
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